[EMP2012] typos; minor suggestions

[Jay Pasachoff]

Fine with me.  Typo: "Megamove" instead of "Megamovie" in the next-to-last sentence of the first paragraph.

Later in the same sentence: "in the solar science" should be "in the solar sciences" or "in "solar science" (probably the latter)

paragraph 2, I would make "would extend to the base of the corona" into "would extend down to the base of the corona"

I would delete the commas before and after "prior to 2017"

acknowledgments: I would delete the first "eclipse" in that sentence about my support.  The abstract should have a period at the end.

Jay

Please clarify: will there be 2 abstracts, or 3?


On Aug 8, 2012, at 12:56 PM, Laura Peticolas wrote:

> <megamovie_abstract_LMP.txt>

______________________________
Jay M. Pasachoff
Field Memorial Professor of Astronomy
Director, Hopkins Observatory
Williams College
33 Lab Campus Drive
Williamstown, MA 01267-2565
413 597 2105; fax: 413 597 3200
jay.m.pasachoff at williams.edu

sabbatical through February 1, 2013
Caltech 150-21
Pasadena, CA 91125
jmp at caltech.edu
cell: 617 285 6351



-------------- next part --------------
An HTML attachment was scrubbed...
URL: http://mailman.ucar.edu/pipermail/emp2012/attachments/20120808/e80988aa/attachment-0001.html