[Dart-dev] [3321] group/posters/trunk/2008_AMS/2008_AMS_hui.tex: grammatical changes to the experiment section - used same tense, for example

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--- group/posters/trunk/2008_AMS/2008_AMS_hui.tex	2008-04-23 14:47:34 UTC (rev 3320)
+++ group/posters/trunk/2008_AMS/2008_AMS_hui.tex	2008-04-23 15:10:29 UTC (rev 3321)
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 NCAR's Weather and Research Forecast (WRF) model is a state-of-the-art mesoscale
 atmospheric model.  The NCAR DART (Data Assimilation Research Testbed)
 ensemble data assimilation system 
-is used to assimilate the observations into WRF, which is then run in forecast mode.
+was used to assimilate the observations into WRF, which was then run in forecast mode.
 This ensemble-based system is particularly good for mesoscale analysis because 
 weather-dependent (i.e. spatially- and temporally-varying) 
 forecast error covariances are used in the generation of the analyses.
 
 \vspace{0.25in}
-\subsection{Experiments}
+\subsection{Experiment Overview}
 
-Assimilations are done every 6 hours for September 13, 2006 and result in a final analysis
-at 00Z 14 September 2006. WRF is configured to run with 35 vertical levels at 36km
+Assimilations were done every 6 hours for September 13, 2006 and resulted in a final analysis
+at 00Z 14 September 2006. WRF was configured to run with 35 vertical levels at 36km
 horizontal resolution with a 120 second timestep.  Thirty-two (32) ensemble members 
-are used for the ensemble assimilation.  Each ensemble member was then run forward to 
-produce a 48-hour forecast. Two sets of nearly identical observations was used to
+were used for the ensemble assimilation.  Each ensemble member was then run forward to 
+produce a 48-hour forecast. Two sets of nearly identical observations were used to
 determine the impact of the RO refractivity observations.
 
 \vspace{0.25in}
-\subsection{NOGPS}
+\subsection{Experiment `NOGPS'}
 
 The following observations were assimilated:
 \begin{itemize}
@@ -139,9 +139,9 @@
 \end{itemize}
 
 \vspace{0.25in}
-\subsection{GPS}
+\subsection{Experiment `GPS'}
 
-The same observations as NOGPS as well as the RO refractivity observations by
+The same observations as NOGPS as well as the RO refractivity observations from
 the COSMIC satellite network.
 
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